Comments for Blog of Ned http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com Old Blog Sun, 06 Apr 2008 07:21:18 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Writing and Cleaning the Toilet by Church of Ned » Do you suffer from being Perfect? http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/02/23/writing-and-cleaning-the-toilet/#comment-84 Church of Ned » Do you suffer from being Perfect? Sun, 06 Apr 2008 07:21:18 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=35#comment-84 [...] goes against another post I wrote about cleaning and that’s why I’m adding it [...] [...] goes against another post I wrote about cleaning and that’s why I’m adding it [...]

]]> Comment on Do you suffer from being Perfect? by Church of Ned » Imperfection 1.1 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/02/28/do-you-suffer-from-being-perfect/#comment-83 Church of Ned » Imperfection 1.1 Sun, 30 Mar 2008 01:44:34 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=43#comment-83 [...] you don’t, read this post from my old blog. I express it in less philosophical [...] [...] you don’t, read this post from my old blog. I express it in less philosophical [...]

]]> Comment on Edit: Taking Lifes Peaks by Ned http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/edit-taking-lifes-peaks/#comment-82 Ned Wed, 26 Mar 2008 03:47:21 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=55#comment-82 Of course Jane. Anything I can do to help. If you have any ideas on how I can help you better, please let me know. Of course Jane. Anything I can do to help. If you have any ideas on how I can help you better, please let me know.

]]> Comment on Edit: Taking Lifes Peaks by Jane http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/edit-taking-lifes-peaks/#comment-81 Jane Tue, 25 Mar 2008 03:33:06 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=55#comment-81 Ned, thank you so much for the critique. You have some very interesting and valid points. I will incorporate your critique with whatever my teacher comments on in my next draft. I'd like to take this article further, and you've given me some paths that I should consider. Thank you so much for your valuable time and thoughtful response! Ned, thank you so much for the critique. You have some very interesting and valid points. I will incorporate your critique with whatever my teacher comments on in my next draft. I’d like to take this article further, and you’ve given me some paths that I should consider. Thank you so much for your valuable time and thoughtful response!

]]> Comment on The Power of a good Outline by Ned http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/the-power-of-a-good-outline/#comment-80 Ned Mon, 24 Mar 2008 23:39:08 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=54#comment-80 I usually stream-of-consciousness for about three or four paragraphs, then make an outline. Kind of like an explorer discovering new territory, then creating a map of what s/he has found. Have you tried other forms of brainstorming? Like creating a web, a timeline or word associations? I've even drawn a picture of a house or a plant and organized my ideas inside the image. I usually stream-of-consciousness for about three or four paragraphs, then make an outline. Kind of like an explorer discovering new territory, then creating a map of what s/he has found.

Have you tried other forms of brainstorming? Like creating a web, a timeline or word associations? I’ve even drawn a picture of a house or a plant and organized my ideas inside the image.

]]> Comment on The Power of a good Outline by Jane http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/the-power-of-a-good-outline/#comment-79 Jane Mon, 24 Mar 2008 17:58:22 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=54#comment-79 I need to learn how to outline. I waste a LOT of time in my writing trying to sort out something in a logical flow. It sounds like a great habit to get into. Do you outline from the very start, or do you outline after you get that initial stream-of-consciousness first draft done? I need to learn how to outline. I waste a LOT of time in my writing trying to sort out something in a logical flow. It sounds like a great habit to get into. Do you outline from the very start, or do you outline after you get that initial stream-of-consciousness first draft done?

]]> Comment on The Power of a good Outline by Church of Ned » Bits and Pieces http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/the-power-of-a-good-outline/#comment-78 Church of Ned » Bits and Pieces Sat, 15 Mar 2008 17:10:29 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=54#comment-78 [...] more direct, uncluttered manner, do so. Even if you are writing something artsy-fartsy, I recommend using an outline. Allow it to be the most repetitive, formulaic, mechanical piece you’ve ever heard. This just [...] [...] more direct, uncluttered manner, do so. Even if you are writing something artsy-fartsy, I recommend using an outline. Allow it to be the most repetitive, formulaic, mechanical piece you’ve ever heard. This just [...]

]]> Comment on How to write an essay in one hour by Ned http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/12/how-to-write-an-essay-in-one-hour/#comment-77 Ned Thu, 13 Mar 2008 23:44:39 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=51#comment-77 No problem Jane.... No problem Jane….

]]> Comment on How to write an essay in one hour by Jane http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/12/how-to-write-an-essay-in-one-hour/#comment-76 Jane Thu, 13 Mar 2008 19:58:59 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=51#comment-76 Nice post! Thank you for writing this! Nice post! Thank you for writing this!

]]> Comment on I am (not) Legend by Church of Ned » I am (not) Legend http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/12/i-am-not-legend/#comment-75 Church of Ned » I am (not) Legend Wed, 12 Mar 2008 16:12:44 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/12/i-am-not-legend/#comment-75 [...] I moved this one to Blog of Ned. [...] [...] I moved this one to Blog of Ned. [...]

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