http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/edit-taking-lifes-peaks/ Old Blog Sun, 06 Apr 2008 07:21:18 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/edit-taking-lifes-peaks/#comment-82 Ned Wed, 26 Mar 2008 03:47:21 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=55#comment-82 Of course Jane. Anything I can do to help. If you have any ideas on how I can help you better, please let me know. Of course Jane. Anything I can do to help. If you have any ideas on how I can help you better, please let me know.

]]> http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/2008/03/25/edit-taking-lifes-peaks/#comment-81 Jane Tue, 25 Mar 2008 03:33:06 +0000 http://nedjlawrence.wordpress.com/?p=55#comment-81 Ned, thank you so much for the critique. You have some very interesting and valid points. I will incorporate your critique with whatever my teacher comments on in my next draft. I'd like to take this article further, and you've given me some paths that I should consider. Thank you so much for your valuable time and thoughtful response! Ned, thank you so much for the critique. You have some very interesting and valid points. I will incorporate your critique with whatever my teacher comments on in my next draft. I’d like to take this article further, and you’ve given me some paths that I should consider. Thank you so much for your valuable time and thoughtful response!

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