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Edit: Taking Lifes Peaks
This is edit of Jane’s homework, “Taking Life’s Peaks One Step at a Time”
I would expand the main idea. What you’ve written isn’t so much “How I cured my chronic back pain” as it is “How seeking a cure for my chronic back pain led to my catharsis”.
Your first paragraph should be like a summary [...]
Posted at 2am on 3/25/08 | 2 comments | Filed Under: How to, Writing | Tagged: editing, suggestions, Writing | read on
